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Ian Pike at TVWC
Ian, comedy, drama and animation writer, has
spoken at a TVWC on the subject of writing for
stage and screen. He is a full-time, freelance
writer with over 25 years' experience.
After training as an actor at the Royal Welsh
College of Music and Drama, he worked
professionally on stage, TV, radio and in
numerous voice-overs. He then became a stand-
up comedian working in clubs and on Live TV
before becoming a full-time writer.
Some years ago he branched out into production and direction
and he is currently in demand for corporate writing work. In a bid
to escape his desk, he frequently delivers workshops and
lectures on scriptwriting and drama across the world,
He has worked with students at a number of British universities at
both undergraduate and postgraduate levels and now travels the
world delivering teacher and student workshops and has
developed a series of online, screenwriting training.
1.
Come up with a spine that you can pitch in one line.
Build foundations.
2.
Make sure that it has a clear beginning middle and end.
3.
Make sure you are then working with an idea for that
particular episode and not trying to write an entire
series in 60 minutes.
4.
Remind yourself what a story is. A protagonist with a
clear goal and lots of obstacles in the way. See Pixar
shorts for confirmation.
5.
Now ask what the story is really about?
6.
Take your characters on a journey.
7.
Make sure the stakes are high. Jeopardy. What do they
stand to lose here? Life of Pi vs Eddie the Eagle.
8.
Do not start writing until you know where you might
end up.
9.
Enjoy a love of big paper. Then cards. Then a scene
breakdown.
10.
Grab your audience at the start.
11.
Read Save the Cat, Russell T Davies and watch Screen
wipe s5 ep 3. And the script of Die Hard 3 for great
action.
12.
Avoid clichés
13.
Hook your audience into the next scene, act and line.
14.
Give them what they want but not in the way they are
expecting it. And make sure they absolutely believe they
are not going to get
what they want at all at some point
near the end.
15.
Cut out 80% of your dialogue. It’s all basically
interrupted
monologues. Forget your English teacher. See National
Treasure.
16
Come in late / get out quickly.
17.
Subtext – much better to find out how your characters
are feeling through what they are saying than doing.
Show don’t tell and lie if need be.
18.
Who are your characters? Hot seat them.
19.
Make sure they don’t have unbelievable turning points.
Stay true to them.
20.
Go through your scene breakdown and ask – what is
the purpose of the scene? If your answer has no
dramatic,
narrative, or character driven answer –
rethink.
21.
Vary the pace. Think of a metronome. How can you get
more variation?
22.
Go through and look at your action. Is it telling the
story/dramatic enough/well written?
23.
Look out for and they all lived happily ever after
endings.
24.
Backstory. Remember your story begins way before we
join it. Think through everything that happened in the
run up to us meeting your characters.
25.
Remember your medium. Is this really just a stage play
with the word ‘screenplay’ on the cover.
26.
Get your hands dirty. Write from the heart and from
experience.
Ian Pike’s 26 rules of scriptwriting.